Not Terribly Funny
While the art can certainly be improved (no doubt about that), the storyline is kinda boring and too predictable. Hone both your artistic and storywriting skills and you'll be an amazing Flash animator.
Not Terribly Funny
While the art can certainly be improved (no doubt about that), the storyline is kinda boring and too predictable. Hone both your artistic and storywriting skills and you'll be an amazing Flash animator.
Yes the art could have been better. But I thouht the storyline was okay, considering that this is just a short.
Anyway Thanks for the helpful review!
Improve your story...
The movie's story is really bland... But your animating is good. Good job but improve your story-telling.
Well I didn't want to do a story for a first time. Hey I'm actually working on something else with more of a story that you might like.
I'm from Singapore... LOL
I have never met a Singaporean Flash Author till now. Btw, I'm from Singapore LOL... For those who don't understand singlish, they are rather broken english combined with malay and hokkien (a chinese language) Let's see if my singlish still works:
Waliao, you damn stupid la...
My work all kiamchai...
On to the flash, nice animating. It is very funny. So Keep Up The Good Work!
well apprantly I am the abosluetely non-exsistant kind....
Well-known INTERNET Flash animators from singapore are almost niche and non-exsistant...
thats why I am determined to make a mark for singapore.
My First Time watching a MIPS episode
This is my 1st time watching a MIPS episode. It gave me a good impression on the series. But one thing that puzzles me, is that a mushroom or something and how did Mario levitate in the castle tower, is that thing levitating it?
yes, that was a mushroom he was eating, and the reason mario was levitating on the tower is because mips was using his psychic ( i spelled it right) powers to do that, watch mips 1 and 2 to see what i mean
It's marvellous!
It's great and it's funny too! Keep up the good work!
Thank you very much, we will keep plugging away at this as it seems to be well-liked and it can only get better.
Thanks for the support!
What an intresting flash
Wow your flash suprised me
thank you, might make a 2nd part
How are you gentlemen !! All your base are belong to us. You are on the way to destruction. Ha ha ha ha.
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